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Rewritten Essay with Inline Explanations

The recent proliferation of technology has transformed the way individuals communicate. For example, social media platforms enable users to maintain connections across vast distances. (Here, providing a specific example adds clarity and relevance to the point.) On the other hand, some argue that face-to-face interactions have diminished in quality.

While technology facilitates a broader range of communication methods, it often replaces the depth of in-person conversations. Moreover, a reliance on digital communication can lead to misunderstandings. (The use of transition words like “moreover” helps to connect ideas smoothly.)

In conclusion, although technology provides unprecedented communication opportunities, it is essential to balance these with traditional face-to-face interactions. (The conclusion effectively summarizes the ideas discussed and reiterates the importance of balance.)


Grammar Issue Commentary and Table

During the analysis of the essay, several recurring grammar issues were identified. Below is a table summarizing these errors and offering explanations:

Error Type Example Explanation
Subject-Verb Agreement “He go to the market.” The correct form is “He goes to the market.” The subject “he” requires the verb “go” to take an ‘s’ to form “goes”.
Pronoun Reference “When a person is late, they should apologise.” In formal writing, ensure pronouns agree in number. “They” is plural but “a person” is singular.
Article Misuse “She has a unique talent.” The use of the article “a” is correct here; “unique” begins with a consonant sound.

Student-Specific Grammar Exercises

Based on the issues identified, here are some exercises to help reinforce correct grammar usage:

  • Rewrite the following sentences to correct subject-verb agreement errors:
    1. The dogs barks at night.
    2. She walk to school every day.
  • Correct the pronoun reference in these sentences:
    1. If a student loses their book, they should notify the teacher.
    2. Everyone must do their homework.
  • Choose the correct article for the following:
    1. It was ____ honor to meet you.
    2. She adopted ____ university approach to the problem.

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